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Post time 4-9-2006 02:13 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by nomie at 2/9/2006 12:19 PM


dew...

biarkan kenangan itu disitu
justeru kenangilah bila perlu
bangkit dan susun aturlah langkahmu
kerana ku yakin disana sinar menunggu
dihujung terowong yg pasti kau lalui tanpa jemu ...


tq nomie...aku simpan sajak ko nihhh...jd azimat n perangsang...hehehe...bagus nukilan ko..aku suka!
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Post time 5-9-2006 03:53 AM | Show all posts

Reply #676 BingkaUbi's post

Salam ...

Nie tengah marah nie ... :bgrin:

Takpe la selang2 dgn puisi .... Baru berwarna-warni thread nie ... BORING la kalau asik puisi jer ... :bgrin:
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Post time 5-9-2006 11:45 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 31-8-2006 06:34 PM


bila dah bincang cakap ya abang halim.



mmmm sokong... yg sy cadangkan ada guide tu is
1. takleh amik lirik lagu
2. takleh ciplak karya yang dah tercetak (cam dalam paper)
3. ada tema...contoh sajak rindu, sajak kecewa, sajak suami isteri, sajak sayang ilahi, sajak cinta anak anak, sajak cinta abstrak, seloka gembira....

hanya cadangan... pikir2...maybe kalau takde guide pun kay gak.
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Post time 5-9-2006 12:15 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 4-9-2006 02:13 PM


tq nomie...aku simpan sajak ko nihhh...jd azimat n perangsang...hehehe...bagus nukilan ko..aku suka!


u re most welcome dew....

aku tak pandai berbicara biasa
semua yang lahir terbit dari luhurnya jiwa
terima kasih kerana sudi menerima
nukilan aku yang tak seberapa.....:bgrin:
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Post time 5-9-2006 06:28 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 4-9-2006 02:08 PM


cik mem..aku xnak ajak minum ke?  muahahahaa...
jum minum jum....


hi cik dew, jom minum hehe.........saya nak order juice honeydew. awak lak? :hmm:
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Post time 5-9-2006 06:29 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by halimijuliana at 5-9-2006 03:53 AM
Salam ...

Nie tengah marah nie ... :bgrin:

Takpe la selang2 dgn puisi .... Baru berwarna-warni thread nie ... BORING la kalau asik puisi jer ... :bgrin:


abang halim tengah marah, kami kena potong kedit tak? :hmm:
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Post time 5-9-2006 06:45 PM | Show all posts
puisi I love you, versi suka suka.......di petang petang ni sambil minum kopi sebab saya hepi............enjoy!!


I love you

you love me too
well, I was told you do
and I know its true
Coz you know what, your eyes tell me so.

you make me happy
you make me snappy
most important really
you make me feel lucky.

Sometimes we may fight
But most times we feel just right
Thats because late in the nite
It is you that holds me tight.

so, Im telling you now
coz you got to know somehow

That I love you (with a cherry on top)
And I know you love me too..........

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Post time 5-9-2006 07:10 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 4-9-2006 02:11 PM


bing..aku pause dulu ye..nnti2 aku balas...mggu ni mggu bz tahap gaban...x sempat nk perah otak buat sajak...selalu tu spontan je dh menjd...kali ni idea mcm dh pupus je...hahaha...



no problem dew..... be happy ya !
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Post time 5-9-2006 07:10 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by halimijuliana at 5-9-2006 03:53 AM
Salam ...

Nie tengah marah nie ... :bgrin:

Takpe la selang2 dgn puisi .... Baru berwarna-warni thread nie ... BORING la kalau asik puisi jer ... :bgrin:



maaf ya abg MOD.....:bgrin:
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Post time 5-9-2006 07:11 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by hitamputih at 5-9-2006 11:45 AM



mmmm sokong... yg sy cadangkan ada guide tu is
1. takleh amik lirik lagu
2. takleh ciplak karya yang dah tercetak (cam dalam paper)
3. ada tema...contoh sajak rindu, sajak kecewa, sajak su ...




apapun syaratnya, aku cam biasa...OK :nerd:
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Post time 5-9-2006 07:12 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by memories at 5-9-2006 06:45 PM
puisi I love you, versi suka suka.......di petang petang ni sambil minum kopi sebab saya hepi............enjoy!!


I love you

you love me too
well, I was told you do
and I know its true
Co ...




nice one memories... adakah ditujukan pada saya ? hehehehehe, saya mmg suka perasan.:nerd:
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Post time 5-9-2006 07:16 PM | Show all posts
I think


I think i like you
I dont know how
Why did this happen now?
i dont know why


All of a sudden I feel happy
You make me laugh when i am down
i feel really lonely
when u are not around


Around you i am joyful
i dont know what it is
I think I like you
What should i do?

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Post time 6-9-2006 02:24 AM | Show all posts
memories, as ur requested...



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Post time 6-9-2006 02:24 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 6/9/2006 02:24 AM
memories, as ur requested...





bing..yg tengah b'kelah tu ko n family ke bing...n unta tu ko ternak ke...wehhh, nk susu unta segar bing...
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Post time 6-9-2006 02:25 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 5/9/2006 07:11 PM




apapun syaratnya, aku cam biasa...OK :nerd:


ha'ah..bisa aja pak...bing, musykil la aku..CINTA ABSTRAK tu camne ekkkk....
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Post time 6-9-2006 02:28 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 6-9-2006 02:24 PM


bing..yg tengah b'kelah tu ko n family ke bing...n unta tu ko ternak ke...wehhh, nk susu unta segar bing...




aku dah agak dah....mesti ada yang tanya.... entah la dew, aku pun tak tahu la sapa yang berkelah tuh....aku tak kenal plak... aku cuma amik gambar pokok kurma yang memories nak tgk tu jek..... hehehehehhehe
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Post time 6-9-2006 02:35 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 6-9-2006 02:25 PM


ha'ah..bisa aja pak...bing, musykil la aku..CINTA ABSTRAK tu camne ekkkk....




cinta abstrak? huhuhuhuhuhu sapa yang bagi istilah tuh?

abstract love - love without reference to a specific object or instance ... hish betul ka aku bagi makna nie ;)
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Post time 6-9-2006 02:50 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by BingkaUbi at 6/9/2006 02:35 PM




cinta abstrak? huhuhuhuhuhu sapa yang bagi istilah tuh?

abstract love - love without reference to a specific object or instance ... hish betul ka aku bagi makna nie ;)


ohhh sorry..t'salah qoute..hitamputih yg kuarkn istilah tuh...hehehe btw tq, tau dh... cenggitu ekkk cinta abstrak..yeyehhh...RAMBANG! hahahha...beshhhnyeeee!
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Post time 6-9-2006 03:10 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by dewberry at 6-9-2006 02:50 PM


ohhh sorry..t'salah qoute..hitamputih yg kuarkn istilah tuh...hehehe btw tq, tau dh... cenggitu ekkk cinta abstrak..yeyehhh...RAMBANG! hahahha...beshhhnyeeee!




eh dew, y not ko tanya sendri orang tuh.... mana tau apa yang aku tulis tu tak sama cam apa dalam fikiran dia masa dia tulis tuh.......
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Post time 7-9-2006 09:15 AM | Show all posts
In the stillness of the night

In the stillness of the night
I come to you my Lord
The most compassionate, merciful
I come in humbleness
I seek forgiveness, for I have sinned

You have never forsaken your servants
When we asked for you, you are always near
closer to us than our jugular veins
It is us who have forgotten sometimes
In seeking worldly pleasure
I became slave to my own desire
forgive me my lord, for I have sinned.

In the stillness of the night
I come to you
with tears rolling down my cheek
I come in humbleness
For to you is my ultimate return
To you is my final destination.



memories, 9 am 7/9/06

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