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NOVEL : LELAKI Bab 19

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Post time 20-6-2016 11:30 AM | Show all posts |Read mode
Edited by akudansesuatu at 19-5-2022 03:32 PM

Assalamualaikum semua... untuk memeriahkan lagi board ni dan menyahut cabaran penulis dan pembaca...aku dengan hidung kembang kempisnya..



Cerita ini masih dalam pembikinan...idea tengah kering, itu yang gatal nak post jugak..
format yang aku pakai sama macam novel yang lain..tak macam novel yang aku buat sebelum ni..
ceritanya tak berat..light and tak stress...bleh la kalau nak baca...
eerr...apa lagi....
tq sebab singgah...komen-komen korang aku cuba pakai tuk pembaikan cerita ni
tima kasih



Pada yang membaca,
memandangkan sekarang zaman smart fon,
jadi bolehlah baca di 2 tempat yang agak mesra telefon ni...



tapi aku update kat sini dulu la kalau ada...

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Post time 20-6-2016 11:51 AM | Show all posts
wah hang dah menyahut seruan aku

apa lagi..tepek la se bab dua bab tiga bab...
tajuk menarik bak hang
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Post time 20-6-2016 12:11 PM | Show all posts
dengan penuh semangat nak baca....sekali skroll....koconggg....
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 Author| Post time 20-6-2016 12:14 PM | Show all posts
Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:10 PM

padam dulu
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 Author| Post time 20-6-2016 12:16 PM | Show all posts
Ipo replied at 20-6-2016 11:51 AM
wah hang dah menyahut seruan aku

apa lagi..tepek la se bab dua bab tiga bab...

ni cite long term..
mau 4 5 tahun baru abis
hihi

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Ezzie replied at 20-6-2016 12:11 PM
dengan penuh semangat nak baca....sekali skroll....koconggg....

sory2...
aku bagi intro dulu yek

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Post time 20-6-2016 12:18 PM | Show all posts
akudansesuatu replied at 20-6-2016 11:14 AM
PROLOG

    Hujan. Perkara paling indah yang selalu terjadi pada muka bumi ini. Tapi turunnya huja ...

waahhhhhhhhhh....puitisnya wei...
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Post time 20-6-2016 12:19 PM | Show all posts
akudansesuatu replied at 20-6-2016 11:16 AM
ni cite long term..
mau 4 5 tahun baru abis
hihi

hang biaq betui?..
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Post time 20-6-2016 01:57 PM | Show all posts
akudansesuatu replied at 20-6-2016 12:16 PM
ni cite long term..
mau 4 5 tahun baru abis
hihi

4,5 tahun? Dah boleh dapat anak dua orang...

Tiba-tiba rasa nak nyanyi lagu Yuna
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Post time 20-6-2016 02:42 PM | Show all posts
akudansesuatu replied at 20-6-2016 12:16 PM
ni cite long term..
mau 4 5 tahun baru abis
hihi

4 5 tahun???

betul2 long term ni...kalau keta dh nk habis ansuran bulanan dh ni....
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 Author| Post time 20-6-2016 03:23 PM | Show all posts
4-5 tahun tu anggaran...ikut kadar watu cite ni
heheh
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 Author| Post time 20-6-2016 03:24 PM | Show all posts
Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:15 PM

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Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:12 PM

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Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:12 PM

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Post time 20-6-2016 03:58 PM | Show all posts
Ezzie replied at 20-6-2016 02:42 PM
4 5 tahun???

betul2 long term ni...kalau keta dh nk habis ansuran bulanan dh ni....

Mujur 4,5 tahun. Kalau ambik maximum 9 tahun?
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Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:13 PM

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Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:13 PM

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Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:15 PM

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Post time 20-6-2016 04:20 PM | Show all posts
akudansesuatu replied at 20-6-2016 02:40 PM
"Assalamualaikum," salam diberi namun tiada suara yang menyahut. Angin sejuk dari dalam kedai mula m ...

Izhan tersalah masuk kedai acik paridah kot?
sebb tu beratus reganya
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 Author| Post time 21-6-2016 09:56 AM | Show all posts
Edited by akudansesuatu at 24-9-2019 12:15 PM

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