My lousy demo - Pg2. New demo [Remember] nu-metal style

itu la masalah saya tidak pandai dalam recording dan mixing......dan suara saya memang tidak sesuai untuk rakam demo..

paler kembang

Originally posted by kry183 at 29-1-2007 08:08 PM
itu la masalah saya tidak pandai dalam recording dan mixing......dan suara saya memang tidak sesuai untuk rakam demo..

kau rakam pakai cool edit!.. software ni cukup bagus!.. ia mampu untuk meletakkan effect bagi bunyi alat muzk dam vokal dan mampu untuk melakukan mixing dan finishing dengan baik lagi cemerlang.  Gunakan sepenuhnya apa yang ada dalam cool edit tu.

[ Last edited by  paler kembang at 1-2-2007 11:00 AM ]

setakat ini saya cuma guna cool edit untuk record saja.....
banyak function dalam saya belum cuba pakai lagi.
lagu seturesnya saya akan cuba letak effect cuba cuba~

terima kasih atas bantuan abang ya~~

Blood Kiss
- [Blood Kiss] full demo download
- [Blood Kiss] instrumental download

section 1: [0:42 - 1:03]
When, standing in the corner under the sky
i stand alone
while, there an angel's wing
laying under the sun
with her heart of bleeding.......

section 2: [1:26 - 2:23]
there's an angel befall in the rain
loving with me
she got a rainbow on her wing
will shining at the dark
i compromise
with the kiss of my blood

and the sorrow have take her life away
away from here
i never want to say goodbye
never want to see you cry
i never lie
with the siege of paradise

section 3: [2:57 - 3:40]
i can see there's a rain
i can see there were red
i can think that was angel's rain
she come here again
she pass through the Gate of Paradise

with her blood in the rain
falling down from the sky
i can feel you just holding me
i fly into the rain
my blood kiss to compromise with you

section 4: [4:52 - 5:05]
her angels' wing
the rainbow's wing
under the sun
will never end
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** lepas lagu ini saya nak tukar mic untuk record vocal laa.....pc mic aku tak boleh pakai langsung, jadi ada apa mic yang sesuai recommand??  
tapi jgn mahal sangat la.....

[ Last edited by  kry183 at 27-2-2007 03:59 PM ]

Desire

[Desire] Demo Download Here

verse 1:
never be freezing
i know will breeding
set me free now   

somebody call me
someboday show me
the day was fading

pre-chorus 1:
and why could every single day
a normal trading have to go

verse 2:
let us to come home
let us decision
face the changing

for me to cover
for me to caveat
a love with meaning

pre-chorus 2:
with every thing to see yourself
i hope again...let some....

chorus:
why do you come home
to find out the reason
another reclaim, leave out to see you go
i never want to go
i never want to know
i never see yourself
i cannot die

one day, i'll call me back
no body know, i will safe to go
i never love to cruel and crawl away

verse 3 (rap):
falling to say, i never fall off the jerk
here we are, turn it up,
to say each time, i will believe

this how you come on the life
i cannot see you away
how do i hang on the cruel
realise, somebody know

repeat: chorus:

bridge:
hold me tonight
i'll stay with you
from the desire, to the infernal

outro:
why i'll fall for the one

sedondon

cake walk ok tak? mcm mana nak recording, guna monothrome tapi monothrome tak dgr masa play balik yg kita dah record tu?

Remember

[Remember] demo download  [upload at 3rd May 2007]

verse 1:
there's some one like chasing time
and made them waste of life
there's some one try loving back
but time is running out

prechorus 1:
(walk in the dark
cant pray the frase
cant find the way
no turning back)

another heart that never fading  No!

chorus:
i'll remember what inside my eyes
am i cry
am i diving now

i'll remember those who take my life
am i die
am i falling down

verse 2:
there's some one like your trading eyes
and be confuse again
there's some one try eternalty
but never be complete

prechorus 2:
(walk in the dark
cant pray the frase
cant find the way
no turning back)

i hate the sun cant turn the light off

(for sexual tray, so far away
for save the way, come face to face)

never fading
never ending
No!

repeat: [chorus]

bridge:
for the end of the time to face off my mind
for the seek of the night to save of my life
celebration come we will fall to die
never fall never die never (be myself)

for the fate of the life it would never left out
for the hate of my mind and made me fell tire
just wan to suicide just want to realise
to compromise No !!!

repeat: [chorus]

outro:
i'll remember see this from your eyes
there was endless in your eyes
(am i cry
am i diving now)

i'll remember see this once last time
there was endless in my mind
(am i die
am i falling down)

[ Last edited by  kry183 at 28-5-2007 05:58 AM ]