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MAU TAPI MALU : Mr. B kembali lagi dgn L.O.V.E uolss!
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Reply #240 freekey's post
errr ni umah org malu tp maw... |
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Reply #242 freekey's post
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klu malu tp mau... ringan2 la pm oja.. |
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Reply #244 hannan_rayyan's post
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Reply #244 hannan_rayyan's post
komen jek  |
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Fulllamak...
G lah pulak... power...power... |
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Reply #248 Leybra's post
a'a kahn.... macam... kahnnn?  |
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wah new rendition of you raise me up
sebagai very big big big and avid fan to this song, i will comment very detail to your singing.
ada part yang i like, ade yang i dislike that maybe you can consider (kalau u sudilah). will comment tomorrow. I will do comparison among the TITAN here!!!!!!! yes!. tunggu yewrrr.
[ Last edited by alyana at 26-11-2008 12:14 AM ] |
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Reply #250 alyana's post
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komen yana.. letakkan sekali rakan2 narnia itew.. |
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Reply #252 alyana's post
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apekah maksud itu?? |
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To Mr G, You Raise Me Up, I've listened to yor rendition. I will give my honest opinion.
To me, your presentation this time, have no magic and dramatic needed for this song, so it was making me go into details or else, I've should enjoy your singing and forget the rest . I'm really have high expectation on you, hope you will reconsider next time, coz i see potential in you
Pitching and tuning quite ok for me. very minimal mistakes. vibratto sounds alittle forced and unnatural as well... tone sounds like you're placing your voice alittle forcefully to the back of your throat...enabling a darker quality, but forced. very much alike Kermit The Frog ( Kermit the frog is a watak kedua of a singer ). u can find it on utube. or movie sounded effect like Shrek voice.
When I am down and, oh my soul, so weary; // I strongly believe you salah masuk all this part.. "oh my soul" , you lost fluidity and flow, making it musically disconnected and lost it soul. death emotion . try not to make it too staccato,you don’t want to sound like a robot.
When troubles come and my heart burdened be; // "burdened be" sounded bad, "when" is mumbling. vibrato not good. death emotion
Then, I am still and wait here in the silence, // "the silence" was a bit muffle. death emotion." the" sounded "der". "then" is good.
Until you come and sit awhile with me. // "until" sounded bad. "sit awhile" quite ok. "me" urghhhh
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains; // sounded bad, so stressfull, and forceful, lost flow. breathing problem? learn how to pronounce "mountain" from sham
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas; //// sounded bad, so stressfull , bad vibrato. try not to make it too staccato,you don’t want to sound like a robot.
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders; // very bad sounding. so forceful. death emotion. ur worst part of all line in this song. "shoulder" or "shoulders" ?
You raise me up... To more than I can be. // very bad. but masa "you raise me up", emotion itu ada, but "when to more than i can be" death emotion. try not to make it too staccato
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains; //very bad sounding. so forceful. death emotion, u need to learn how to pronounce "mountain" from sham
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas; //very bad sounding. so forceful. death emotion
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;//" I am strong" sounded beautiful. good. "I am on your shoulders" sounded bad
You raise me up... To more than I can be. //very bad sounding. so forceful. death emotion . try not to make it too staccato,you don’t want to sound like a robot.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;// "You Raise Me Up" very bad sounding. so forceful. death emotion. You should have start build up roh roh. Climax dah! so where is the dramatic!?. "So I Can" voice cracked! u need to learn how to pronounce "mountain" from sham. bad vibrato. give energy, bagi berhantu! Give dramatic element!
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas; // pitchy and death emotion. vibrato not that good.
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders; // death emotion. the "yeyeh" towards the end, even make it wost. and make u lost the image that you want to show. lack of support. where is the dramatic??
You raise me up... To more than I can be. // death emotion. , the "be" shouting part at the end, make it worse. "be" flat!.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains; // should start built roh roh! climax dah ! bagi dramatic! bagi berhantu!u need to learn how to pronounce "mountain" from sham
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas; // all line very bad sounded ,, too forceful and death emotion. where is the dramatic? "You raise me up" lack of breath support.
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders; // "I am strong" very beautiful, "I am..." bad sounding. "shoulder" or "shoulders"?
You raise me up... To more than I can be. // pitchy
You raise me up... To more than I can be. // lost identity of the image that you want to bring. this what you should have done since beginning dear. but when you screech and force "be" , you ruin it. "raise me up" very beautiful.
This is very hard song actually. so good effort for trying. Not all people can even at least reach your level. |
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whoaa... ada kermit the frog.. ada shrek jugek.. |
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Reply #254 alyana's post
abg sham sing naik 2 key jugak kew? |
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Reply #258 alyana's post
sungguh, tataw.... oja taw shrek jek
shrek kiut sgt kan kaka yana? |
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Post time 24-11-2008 11:45 PM
