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Author: Lynn9

Cerpen: Episod Cinta Amir~TAMAT~

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 Author| Post time 2-12-2013 11:06 AM | Show all posts
“Oi cik kak..penampar awak je awak tahu eh? Awak nak rasa saya punya pulak?”

“Saya nak minta tolong pun tak boleh?”

“Err...awak nak minta tolong apa sebenarnya?”

“Tu...tayar kereta saya pancit kat depan tu..”

Aku tersengih sumbing. Rupanya nak minta tolong tukarkan tayar kereta dia. Itulah perempuan tahu bawa kereta je. Bukannya aku ni arif sangat. Tayar kereta aku pun aku tak pernah tukar sendiri. Memanglah secara teori tu aku tahu tapi tak pernah cuba secara praktikal.

“Apesal tak panggil Auto Assist je?” tanya aku.

“Public phone tu semua tak boleh pakai...”

“Tu handphone?”

Dia tersengih sumbing. Tak ada credit. Pulak! Terkial-kial juga aku menukar tayar kereta dia. Maklumlah first time. Berpeluh juga aku dibuatnya. Tapi terpaksalah juga berlagak macho. Tak nak menjatuhkan maruah kaum adam.

“Ok dah siap” ujar aku.  Dia tersenyum lebar. Sweet juga.

“Thanks yer...nah saya ikhlas” sambil dia menghulur RM20 pada aku.

“Eh! Apa ni?”

“Ambillah...kesian saya tengok awak berpeluh-peluh tolong saya”

“Eh..tak pe...tak pe...saya pun ikhlas juga”

Dia berkeras juga nak aku terima. Tapi aku tetap menolak. Lagipun tolong perempuan tu..kalau tolong lelaki mahu aku charge RM50.

“Terima kasih awak...”

“Sama-sama kasih...” ujar aku sambil senyum meleret.

“Saya Eranza..” dia menghulur tangan.

“Amir...Amir Zuhdi..”

Dan dari situlah bermula satu lagi episod baru dalam hidup aku. Episod cinta Amir! ~TAMAT~
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Post time 2-12-2013 11:06 AM | Show all posts
Lynn9 posted on 2-12-2013 09:28 AM
Sejak hari itu aku cuba meneruskan kehidupan. Kisah seribu duka ini aku harap sudah berlalu. Walaupu ...

Zurin ke atau orang lain???
wahaa.... sedyynya

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Post time 2-12-2013 11:08 AM | Show all posts
Lynn9 posted on 2-12-2013 11:06 AM
“Oi cik kak..penampar awak je awak tahu eh? Awak nak rasa saya punya pulak?”

“Saya nak minta t ...

tamat da??

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 Author| Post time 2-12-2013 11:10 AM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 2-12-2013 11:08 AM
tamat da??

@NaylaArisha ~ a'ah...tamat dah...
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Post time 2-12-2013 11:26 AM | Show all posts
Lynn9 posted on 2-12-2013 11:10 AM
@NaylaArisha ~ a'ah...tamat dah...

seddyyy nak dia ngn zurin ...






bila nak buat citer baru lak
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Post time 2-12-2013 12:00 PM | Show all posts
Ahhh...suka ending Amir bukn dgn zurin
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Post time 2-12-2013 12:02 PM | Show all posts
Thanks Lynn. Nice

komen kecil. Kalau surat Zurin tu you buat dalam bentuk 'surat', mesti lagi syahdu.... huhuhu

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 Author| Post time 2-12-2013 12:14 PM | Show all posts
Nicki_Meow posted on 2-12-2013 12:02 PM
Thanks Lynn. Nice

komen kecil. Kalau surat Zurin tu you buat dalam bentuk 'surat', mest ...

@NaylaArisha ~ huwaaa...cinta Amir & Zurin tak kesampaianlah... tak pe Insya Allah citer baru coming soon...kot?
@Sarizu ~ thanks for your support
@Nicki_Meow ~ thanks Nicki ...kena tuntut ilmu lebih ngan Nicki ni...appreciate your comments

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Post time 18-3-2014 11:02 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
2 thumbs up...semua emosi ada bergabung dalam 1 penceritaan...gaya bahasa yg sempurna..suka sgt cerpen ni...
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Post time 24-3-2014 01:58 PM | Show all posts
novelloverzz posted on 18-3-2014 11:02 AM
2 thumbs up...semua emosi ada bergabung dalam 1 penceritaan...gaya bahasa yg sempurna..suka sgt cerp ...

da abes baca kaka... best...
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Post time 24-3-2014 02:45 PM | Show all posts
anniez08 posted on 24-3-2014 01:58 PM
da abes baca kaka... best...

nnt kaka suggest cerpen lak kat N ye...
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 Author| Post time 24-3-2014 09:08 PM | Show all posts
novelloverzz posted on 18-3-2014 11:02 AM
2 thumbs up...semua emosi ada bergabung dalam 1 penceritaan...gaya bahasa yg sempurna..suka sgt cerp ...

Tq cos' sudi baca
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 Author| Post time 24-3-2014 09:10 PM | Show all posts
anniez08 posted on 24-3-2014 01:58 PM
da abes baca kaka... best...

Tq
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Post time 24-3-2014 09:11 PM | Show all posts
novelloverzz posted on 24-3-2014 02:45 PM
nnt kaka suggest cerpen lak kat N ye...

wokey.. kaka nov gitau mana yg best lagi..
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Post time 24-3-2014 10:01 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Lynn9 posted on 24-3-2014 09:08 PM
Tq cos' sudi baca

Sama2....
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Post time 27-3-2014 12:00 PM | Show all posts
1st time baca cerpen kt cari..
saja cari cerita yg dh ada ending..
xla asyik ternanti2 sambungan..

best gak cerita ni..
kdg2 geram dgn si amir tu..
baik hati & lurus bendul sgt..

ada ke patut siap cari bwh katil masa si zurin tu demam,
kot2 dia jatuh katil... hailaaa... buat lawak sunggoh..

apepun harap ada smbungan lg..
kali ni kisah amir dgn eranza  plak.. (nama mcm kereta avanza le pulok)
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 Author| Post time 27-3-2014 09:41 PM | Show all posts
Ryu-NurESQue posted on 27-3-2014 12:00 PM
1st time baca cerpen kt cari..
saja cari cerita yg dh ada ending..
xla asyik ternanti2 sambungan.. ...

tq dear sudi baca
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Post time 10-4-2014 12:36 PM | Show all posts
mula2 menyampah betul ng zurin tu...

nasib baik x jadi kawen
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Post time 12-4-2014 01:28 PM | Show all posts
kesian amir..kena tipu dengan zurin
tapi best lah ceita ni, byk pengajaran
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 Author| Post time 13-4-2014 06:42 PM | Show all posts
anna-zara posted on 10-4-2014 12:36 PM
mula2 menyampah betul ng zurin tu...

nasib baik x jadi kawen

Thanks for reading
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