[HORA] Cover of Selamat Ulang Tahun Sayang(youtube)

reez54

ekekeke....tu dah try meminimakan tu

pinguin

I setujuk.. makin lama makin ok...

reez54

jap ekkk...tgh nk redo tak jerit2 bahagian fers two tu

seroja

thn depan abg reez masuk amelika idol katenye

alyana

Originally posted by seroja at 19-12-2008 10:53 PM
thn depan abg reez masuk amelika idol katenye

selamat tinggal

seroja

jgn la nanesss



net kan ada.

alyana

Originally posted by seroja at 19-12-2008 11:10 PM
jgn la nanesss



net kan ada.

wira Qu, jangan dilupain

reez54

jp ek kaka yana....nk hapload yg lama ni

reez54

oyeaaa..luferrr...ngeee.tenkiu kaka yana krane komen detail.... kaka yana sgt bess

buiscasey

dah dengar dua-dua..

aku lagi prefer versi tak jerit.. syahdu skit...

versi jerit tu, agak terkejut gak dengar... kedengaran mcm josh grobang ada gak, tp versi hampir nak jadi.. nak kata tak jadi, tak blh gak.. so hampir nak jadi lah....

anyway, good job. vibrato dah kurang skit....  

seroja

mcm ni lewww.... jersi ta jerit mang besh! cecci katenye

seroja

eh... mendap kew?

pinguin

ok jer rasanya oja

reez54

tak mendap kan

seroja

jersi plak... versi alangkah jawoh nye J ngan V

seroja

part oja jek mendap td.

reez54

johor n venezuela agak jaoh aaaa

pinguin

JOHOr? pingu kat JOHOr ni.. sapa kat johor lagi

alyana

tengah dengar

alyana

veri sopan  *tak jerit*
Ben, the two of us need look no more // superb!!!! but hati2 dengan word ben 'coz u drag it too long i suppose it refer to couple of notes, but you add 1 additional note, maybe ade orang muzik tak suka )
We both found what we were looking for // superb!!! (but the hook for looking for , you bend down the key, as ot suppose it bend up, pencipta lagu ini maybe ade tujuan bila dia bend up!, but to ok )
With a friend to call my own // ok but if u can stress word 'friend' it will be superb
I'll never be alone //ok,
And you, my friend, will see // ok
You've got a friend in me //  ok bif. 'me' tambah another 1 second vibrato, ok but u can be superb!


Ben, you're always running here and there //ok, but if u press word 'running' it will be superb
You feel you're not wanted anywhere // ok
If you ever look behind  //ok, but behind flat
And don't like what you find  // ok and sensual sexi

There's something you should know // ok, just nice
You've got a place to go // superb actually , but if i were you i will delyed at 'to' then connect with go, so it won't be that stacatto


I used to say "I" and "me"  // Superb!
Now it's "us", now it's "we"   // Superb! but 'now' u lambat setengah second i guest
I used to say "I" and "me"  // Superb! so pro here! thats u repeat I and me I and me, wow so menjadi here.... really sexual
Now it's "us", now it's "we"  //eh ni bukan u hehehe
Ben, most people would turn you away // ok but your hook at away is flat
I don't listen to a word they say // ok , you tend to bend down the key , i notice it, u can do it, but not at every all end!!
They don't see you as I do // ok, but 'I' flat
I wish they would try to // superb! and so sensual , dreamy and secci. i love your "try to" , so secci and have sex attraction
I'm sure they'd think again // i dun know this part, something wrong, but i dun know wat it is
If they had a friend like Ben // superb!
(a friend) Like Ben  // superb!
(like Ben) Like Ben // superb!

overall sudah ok laa....  but if you nak go topro standar wherever u go, maybe u shud consider what i'm saying above. u do big major changes at 2 places. when the key should bend up, u bend it down. If I were the creator of tis song, i wud rather not like it, coz to me, i do it  on purpose hokkay.

dulu: 3/5
now: 3.9/5

but having said that, this song amat seswai at majlis makan malam atau pak cik ajami , i think it already can mesmerize many

[ Last edited by  alyana at 20-12-2008 05:03 PM ]