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ALAHAI SAJALI...

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Post time 27-2-2008 09:57 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by SeparuhNafas at 26-2-2008 10:41 PM
Jika kamu memancing  ikan....
setelah ikan itu terlekat di mata kail,
hendaklah kamu
mengambil terus ikan itu....
janganlah sesekali,
kamu lepaskan ia semula,
ke dalam air begitu sahaja.... ...




tok baruk best sajak, udah ko maca tek SAJALI,  mun ko nulis kelak hal gadis, hal wanita, hal perempuan
sebab idea kau ya sik panjang, idea ko SAJALI sik berkembang, nulis kak ya ia lagik, sik ada perubahan
besar dalam tulisan ko ya SAJALI....iboh ko nak ngegeh
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Post time 27-2-2008 10:16 AM | Show all posts
OOO...jd ko x minat nk maca puisi2 @ sajak2 mr sajali yg bkaitan hal2 pmpuan ka.. ,
mun ya lah di maok...sound direct jak...
request to mr sajali...create puisi2 brkaitan hal lain..

utk mengelakkan mcm2 spekulasi... :victory:
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Post time 27-2-2008 10:39 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by SeparuhNafas at 26-2-2008 10:41 PM
Jika kamu memancing  ikan....
setelah ikan itu terlekat di mata kail,
hendaklah kamu
mengambil terus ikan itu....
janganlah sesekali,
kamu lepaskan ia semula,
ke dalam air begitu sahaja.... ...


Besssst sajak kitak...

tahniah..suka kamek...
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Post time 27-2-2008 11:30 AM | Show all posts
pasal puisi pun nak kecoh...
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Post time 27-2-2008 12:32 PM | Show all posts

pa ndak ka nak di bego hal puisi.... sik relevant alu isu nak kecoh2 tok ehhhh

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Post time 27-2-2008 05:57 PM | Show all posts

Reply #203 nanamiri's post

mintak maap semua..
sajak ya bukan kmk yg cipta..
kmk just kupi and paste ajak dari pc kmk..
sik pasti kmk dari siney sajak ya..

[ Last edited by  SeparuhNafas at 27-2-2008 07:08 PM ]
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Post time 27-2-2008 06:39 PM | Show all posts
pasal puisi pun nak kecoh...

pa ndak ka nak di bego hal puisi.... sik relevant alu isu nak kecoh2 tok ehhhh

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Post time 28-2-2008 05:40 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by azry53 at 27-2-2008 09:57 AM




tok baruk best sajak, udah ko maca tek SAJALI,  mun ko nulis kelak hal gadis, hal wanita, hal perempuan
sebab idea kau ya sik panjang, idea ko SAJALI sik berkembang, nulis kak ya ia lagi ...


tawuk tak aper
tak tawuk, tapi buat2 taawuk tak aper
aper aper ajelah
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Post time 28-2-2008 08:35 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by chep at 27-2-2008 06:39 PM
pasal puisi pun nak kecoh...

pa ndak ka nak di bego hal puisi.... sik relevant alu isu nak kecoh2 tok ehhhh




macam ku pernah dgr ayat2 itu...... tapi di mana ya..... Copy n Paste eeekk......

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Post time 28-2-2008 09:47 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by jenni_84 at 28-2-2008 08:35 AM



macam ku pernah dgr ayat2 itu...... tapi di mana ya..... Copy n Paste eeekk......



cuba kitak find out, research......then mun dah dapat lak engkah hasil ciptaan................
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Post time 28-2-2008 10:30 AM | Show all posts
sikda idea ..... baruk pas kelai ngan org.....
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Post time 28-2-2008 02:05 PM | Show all posts
kelai pasal pa?
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Post time 28-2-2008 05:45 PM | Show all posts
chep dah ketandusan idea ya...

hhhahahahahhahahah!!
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Post time 28-2-2008 05:54 PM | Show all posts


alahai.....


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Post time 28-2-2008 11:44 PM | Show all posts

Reply #214 buDak_gaTaL's post

tok gik sorang ketandusan idea...

tok nang sentiasa tandus tok...
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Post time 29-2-2008 10:11 AM | Show all posts


xrindok nak berporum mun panaz ajak sama dirik


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Post time 29-2-2008 10:28 AM | Show all posts
iboh la panaz sama dirik gi..... kool down......
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Post time 29-2-2008 11:54 PM | Show all posts
pa kamek sikda rasa panas gik pun??
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Post time 5-3-2008 09:46 AM | Show all posts


sik makei baju ne ndak nisik panas


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Post time 5-3-2008 12:20 PM | Show all posts
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