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I'M BROKEN (E-NOVEL)

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Post time 2-12-2013 08:59 PM | Show all posts |Read mode



don’t talk to girls
they’ll break your heart”


everyone says the pain will less as time passes,
but I don’t believe them.
I think they only say it so u can face getting out of bed every day.
You think today might be day,but it never is.




memory never fades perhaps?? The way she broke his heart, it’s such a pain. Pain that never fades. It will remain as scar forever.




2008



“I nak kita break”


“break? You bergurau dengan I ke sayang? I datang rumah you hari ni nak pinang you.”


“ I’m not kidding okay. I nak kita b-r-e-ak.”


“but why”


“I rasa I dah tak sayang you. I sayang orang lain. Hari ni dia nak datang pinang i. I harap you faham.”


“don’t be a pain in the butt Zara. Are you kidding me? So five years are really nothing to you? Tell me Zara!!” I want a good explaination from you.”


“promise me that after I explain, you’ll go”


“okay”


“I dah tak rasa chemistry antara kita berdua. Marriage is not things to have fun with. I want my marriage last forever and live with my loved one forever but you are not my loved one anymore. I’m sorry.”


“sorry for disturbing you and your fiancée to be. Thank for great 5 years we’ve been through. Thanks for everything.




Pertama kali air matanya gugur. Sanggup Zara buat dia macam ni. She’s the only girl that I care about. Orang  dah tak nak kat kita, buat apa lagi kita mengharap.


Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain
Telling me just what a fool I've been
I wish that it would go and let me cry in vain
And let me be alone again


The only girl I care about has gone away
Looking for a brand new start
But little does she know that when she left that day
Along with her she took my heart


Rain, please tell me, now, does that seem fair
For her to steal my heart away when she don't care?
I can't love another when my heart's somewhere far away

The only girl I care about has gone away
Looking for a brand new start
But little does she know that when she left that day
Along with her she took my heart


Rain, won't you tell her that I love her so?
Please, ask the sun to set her heart a
glow
Rain in her heart and let the love we knew start to grow


Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain
Telling me just what a fool I've been
I wish that it would go and let me cry in vain
And let me be alone again



Oh, listen to the falling rain
Pitter-patter, pitter-patter

Oh, listen, listen to the falling rain
Pitter-patter, pitter-patter








Dear,
we’ve been so long
I guess what they say is true
Lovers come and go
But I never thought
That would apply to you.









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Post time 3-12-2013 11:00 AM | Show all posts
Salam... Tajuk so urban. Seems like you are confident enough to write english novel. Sorry, akak x fluent in english but i noticed ada few grammar and spelling errors.

Kdg2 kesalahan2 sebegini mbuat pbaca berkata.... Mcm gempak tp nan hadoooo....

Maaf, bukan mengata tp am just xpressing my opinion. Harap dpt terima sebagai teguran mbina.

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Post time 4-12-2013 03:52 PM | Show all posts
Intro mcm best je

Next!
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 Author| Post time 4-12-2013 09:14 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
ladyFinger12 posted on 3-12-2013 11:00 AM
Salam... Tajuk so urban. Seems like you are confident enough to write english novel. Sorry, akak x f ...

Terima kasih atas komen yang membina.. akan diperbaiki lg penggunaan bahasa inggeris. .
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 Author| Post time 4-12-2013 09:15 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
sarizu posted on 4-12-2013 03:52 PM
Intro mcm best je

Next!

Thanks for reading and comment. . Akan update lg:-)
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Post time 8-1-2014 03:10 PM | Show all posts
lavenderpurple posted on 4-12-2013 09:15 PM
Thanks for reading and comment. . Akan update lg:-)

update jangan tak... nak tahu next apa....
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm....excited baca...mcm tue jer
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