Joe FARIZAL perform di hotel bluewave jb pd 22hrb nov 08

seroja

lirik kurang berkenan la.

alyana

hip hop penyelamat, wow so refreshing! great! good mixing! nice voice that suit thing that u nak carry.
but i guest u masih muda2 sgt2, can't wait bila ur tone betul2 mature nanti    sbb sekarang ni masih agak lembut lagi. but tak salah pun la kalau agak soft.

tp kadang2 your rapping tu miss dari beat music.. but not all place la, very little. mmg disengajakan ke?


tears on her pillow = amat bagus sekali! so dramatic!, goosebump! ur rapping amat bagus here, synchronize dgn music.   bagi i, tears on her pillow tu mmg boleh sale sgt2.... hope you akan dapat byk shows , but ada byk tempat yg music agak kacau pulak.
i rasa, your rapping ni mcm banyak bau2 singapore.....  rapping /muzik singapore ni lain dr style kl ni..... but mmg best! i like!

perlu kamu=quite bad, messy , rapping agak hilang arah tuju, harmony very bad neither  dr your own voice or from that girl.

demo = wow! good music!!!!!!  goosebump!!!!! good rapping! tp i tak boleh bezakan ur singing atau ekwan, suara nak sama2 pulak. here, your voice err ke ekwan, amat bagus, so deep, and crispy, ala2 bass . bagus sekali. mesti mahal mic ni yewww .  tp your remix yg saat akhir tu, ya hampunzzzz very turn off (bagi i lah)

i think it is about time you should try talkbox. and stuff from t-pain, my fren byk dah venture into this. and u so reminded me of him   . they are using hip hoop  beat looping dr kawan2 yg study dr oversea, sbb nak safe duit katanya, * i pun tak paham safe mcm mana* maybe boleh elak credit card over internet kowttt.
then they use fruity loop to compose thier song and muic, siap ada amp segala. but now, they change pakai mac, guna garageband . and so far, kalau nak belajar remixing ade sebuah tempat kat cheras . amat bagus katanya .

so uols ni pakai apa ye? i pun tertanya2 mcm kak mee.  overall, masih boleh berkembang lagi , keep on music. but above average , big potential in you.   lagu u yg demo dan hip hop penyelamat tu very genius lah!... master of composing . cuma hip hop penyelamat tu ada bau2 lagu puff daddy yg lama2 yg missing missing you tu, walau pun agak fresh.... but yg demo tu, wahhhhhh so dramatic and goosebump! but i wish ade suara jin kat lagu demo tu ( i mean very deep husky voice yg boleh feature with u) mesti lagi meletup!.

so, lagu 'demo'      i standing ovation .  i teringat masa terikut someone pi show, ade sebuah group tu, with this kind of music, all were, abang bob species, do stuff like this, sambil menari dan melompat ( dgn gaya tangannn hip hopp wajib ittew), and menjerit + rapping.... mmg ramai suka, sampai org terhenjut . tp dalam hati i, i tak tahan tgk mereka over ala2 bluehyppo, nak meruntuhkan pentas

[ Last edited by  alyana at 2-11-2008 08:12 PM ]

alyana

Originally posted by joefarizal at 31-10-2008 11:10 PM
he he..sat joe btol kn ok...


jawapan.

1.yup,lagu nie sme joe buat sndri sbb dah serik nyanyi lagu org..

2. rcord kat uma je.tepi pc depan mac book..he he he...quality bagus pkai iMac o ...

yess baru terbaca your reply , nowadays  ramai my frends dah pakai   pakai mac + garageband+ mic  samson gtrack.
outcome amazing!.

but my advice for ur music, belajar lebih effect, and if u got someone yg boleh buat suara gergasi, maybe lebih best .

joefarizal

he he he..
thank u 4 da cmment...
lagu hip hop penyelamat mmg..
ade yg ttnggal sbb disengajakan...mcm tau2 je...he he he....tapi lagu ni is da feveret!

tears on her pillow pulak lagu  i wrote from my heart cuz nie la yg blaku kat saya now..
ha ha..and i hope lagu nie lepas masok radio soon.....
actually my style is more 2 jayz,kanye west,lupe fiasco n cat farish..cume sore je mcm budak2...mmg muda pon...
am 18....

lagu demo aku tak perlu hook 2 juz preview...
smlm kitorg dag rcord balik so insyaallah lagi baek qualitynye....
thank u sgt cuz bg cmment yg buat lagi smangat nk buat lagu mcm 2....
ya btol la pe yg ur mmbe ckp...
sy pon guna beat2 mmbe dari new york sbb blom hebat lagi nak buat beat mcm 2..ade loop2 n everythng...

lagu perlu kamu 2 nnti nak rcoding balik bcuz da harmony n arrangement sgt terabo..malunye...

i use mac also tok rcoding sbb quality bagus sgt....mmg TERBAEK!...


bydaway,
kalau nak denga lagu baru tajoknye THIS IS HOW I FEEL bole denga n download kat sini http://www.aimini.net/view/?fid=YmDzPG0vReUG93LfzZ29

jgn lupe tell me what u think bout da tracks ok..

thanks!!!:pompom::pompom::pompom::pompom:

joefarizal

dun wory..i will..he he he..

alyana

Originally posted by joefarizal at 2-11-2008 08:19 PM
he he he..
thank u 4 da cmment...
lagu hip hop penyelamat mmg..
ade yg ttnggal sbb disengajakan...mcm tau2 je...he he he....tapi lagu ni is da feveret!

tears on her pillow pulak lagu  i wro ...

lagi satu about my members yg into this genre, they all suka clubbing

hopefully you tak mcm tu ye, jadi abang soleh solehin tau , walaupun dlm genre ni, surau tak miss

joefarizal

he he he,,,
surau 2 miss gak slalu n clubbin tak jugak even uma sblah snway pyramid..
he he he he...

seroja

cer la wat lagu rap ala2 nasyid gitiew? leh tak?

alyana

"this is how i fill "- lagu amat bagus sekali! that effect, thats wat i'm talking about! the org gergasi, effect here and there! great!! i see big future ahead in you. i bayangkan let saya kalau kita ambik SPM, you are among calon yg ditarget dpt 10 A 1, u know what i mean?!  maybe in 2 or 3 years times, more technology , styling and techniques you dapat, i have no doubt if give appropriate chances , then u can at least wujudlah dalam industry .   sebab sekrg ni rmai org pandai nyanyi aje tp tak reti compose music, nd thing around.  so u ade advantage.  back to lagu ni, rapping byk lari from beat, (at times) , rapping and beat should sensitively align bang bang bang! cam tu. .     i personally tak berapa into this song, sbb i lebih prefer aggressive rap. or at least at certain part maybe you boleh add, and jadikan dia aggresive, mcm lagu demo.
but maybe ni depend kepada self preference.


i like the information that u express in this song. but ade certain part in your rapping you should give more tekanan tu sebutan! ade part yg buat, ada byk juga yg tu tak buat. and some says in rapping sesuai buat vocal fry jua.

overall

lagu = ok, so relaxing , but i wish ade remix with agressive rapping, and looping.
vocal = i dah sebut kat atas
lirik = no komen , sbb nak jadi ghetto katanya

good but can be better!   

but to me, demo was very 'out of box' and so urban!!!!!

[ Last edited by  alyana at 2-11-2008 08:51 PM ]

joefarizal

ala2 nasyid??...
he he he...
now joe xkn buat lagu mcm 2 nye stlye cuz nk buat 2 kne la btolkn dri sndri dulu...nnti rap dakwah2 agama tsalah org tnye nk jwb ape...
nie dri sndri xbtol,smayang pon tnggal nk rap dakwah o nasihat org dgn lagu..he he he he he......tol x??

alyana

Originally posted by seroja at 2-11-2008 08:48 PM
cer la wat lagu rap ala2 nasyid gitiew? leh tak?

ojaaaaa     

seroja

teda la cmtuh sekali. maksud oja ... dr  segi lirik tuh... or mebe oja blum leh trime F thingy tuh,, so mcm dengar pun nak dengar lagi.. sbb suka beat n vokal. tp lirik so so ta dpt dengar ooo....

joefarizal

alhamdulillah...org yg cmment mcm nie lah yg sye cari...
baru besh..!nie aset sedapkn ati je..
xabes ngan OK OK OK...
he he he...
thank u byk2!!...
sme nye mmbakar.....
hope u always cmment my new tracks!....
nnti lagu DEMO tu dah siap yg btol i will tell u...'thank u!:victory:
:victory: :victory:

alyana

Originally posted by joefarizal at 2-11-2008 09:03 PM
alhamdulillah...org yg cmment mcm nie lah yg sye cari...
baru besh..!nie aset sedapkn ati je..
xabes ngan OK OK OK...
he he he...
thank u byk2!!...
sme nye mmbakar.....
hope u always cmment ...

yes, i can't wait your 'demo', campur sikit lsuara gergagasi, but jgn byk2.....  i dh boleh burn lagu tu masuk dlm my ipod   and ringtone.

mee_maggie

ngaper iols terasa nie



Fyi , alyana pengkritik diva kat sini . Semua org ternanti2 komen yana

joefarizal

he he he...
wokeyh....
no poblem......
:pompom: :pompom:

joefarizal

laaa~
patot la power die nye kritik...
suke suke!!

seroja

untung sgt bro joe dpt kritikan free.
kiterang kene baya taw br dpt kritik.
diva la katakan..





larikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

joefarizal

he he he...
xpe...
alhamdulillah de jugak prg nk kritik mcm 2...
he he he he...

joefarizal

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