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[HORA] Orkestra Sedih ciptaan sy - minta pendapat

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Post time 30-1-2009 06:51 AM | Show all posts |Read mode
hi kwn2 sy nak mintak pendapat korang mengenai lagu orkestra ciptaan sy nih. tajuknya "mencariMu"...sbnarnye melodi asalnye dah ade, cume dlm pikiran lg blom lg buat lakaran kasar, tp sy dah ade idea utk intro part dia..em...tuh pun blom abis lagi. sbnarnye sy nak buat lagu nih mcm sedih sikit tapi tak tau jadi ke tak... korang rase mcm mane? sample clip nih lbh kurang 30 saat je, last part i fade out sbb bunyi piano kuat sgt i blom adjust lagik... ah btw kalo ade pape kesilapan tlg tunjukkan... cth harmony ke, voicing, expression, articulations...etc... sbb sy tak pnah ambik kelas muzik. i main muzik for leisure tp suke compose lagu...sy tunggu kritikan anda ya....

ok download dari rapidshare je ~700kb

http://rapidshare.com/files/191329459/Orchestra.mp3

or dgr trus dari imeem:

http://www.imeem.com/people/J2PMGXe/music/x2EB_PSx/nasr_presa1200_orchestramp3/

btw sy buat skoring pakai Overture 4.0, Adobe Audition 3 dan EWQL Colossus sbg VST...okay guys... thanks so much for ur time and attention. have a nice day

[ Last edited by  jac_diehard_fan at 29-5-2009 11:36 ]

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Post time 30-1-2009 09:15 AM | Show all posts

Reply #1 Presa1200's post

menjadi , memang cam sedih. Klo ada gesekan biola lagi power.

mee tak pandai bab gubahan nie .tak vley nak kasi pendapat .

tak sabar nak dengar lagu penuh :pompom:
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 Author| Post time 30-1-2009 09:34 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by mee_maggie at 30-1-2009 09:15 AM
menjadi , memang cam sedih. Klo ada gesekan biola lagi power.

mee tak pandai bab gubahan nie .tak vley nak kasi pendapat .

tak sabar nak dengar lagu penuh


hi thx sgt2 komen u. a'ah i pnah terlintas dlm hati nak try pakai biola. u pnah dgr lagu Ibu-P.ramlee yg dimainkan oleh cik mat long dlm orkestra RTM tuh? best giler... i pun tak sabar nak siapkan lagu nih cume makan masa bbrp hari je... orait kalo dah siap i bg tau k. thx for ur sapport
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Post time 30-1-2009 09:36 AM | Show all posts
ni kalo jd lagu tema gaza.kompom mengalr air mata...
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 Author| Post time 30-1-2009 09:52 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by 033589 at 30-1-2009 09:36 AM
ni kalo jd lagu tema gaza.kompom mengalr air mata...


sedih lah rmai yg terkorban... ade org buat videoclip pasal palestine pakai lagu "Bahasa Terindah" - Ramli Sarip lg power beb. lagu tuh mmg sedih arr dah lah nyanyi pasal Nabi sejurus tuh lihat ramai umat yg terbunuh tak dpt bayangkan mcm mane kesedihan tuh... kalo ade masa u dgr lah gak lagu tuh, best...!!
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Post time 30-1-2009 11:42 AM | Show all posts
intro melody best aa..overal i ske the harmony....solo first tu clarinet ke? bunyiknye agak provocative macam nak stresskan kesedihan gitu..in a way i ske..tapi tu sume terpulang kepade theme lagu ni..
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 Author| Post time 30-1-2009 05:16 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by mizz_ford at 30-1-2009 11:42 AM
intro melody best aa..overal i ske the harmony....solo first tu clarinet ke? bunyiknye agak provocative macam nak stresskan kesedihan gitu..in a way i ske..tapi tu sume terpulang kepade theme lag ...


tq so much mizz ford. yg solo tuh piccolo sbb range dia hanya utk high notes je. tp range clarinet lbh byk berbanding piccolo. dua2 i rase bunyi pun ok je. theme lagu dah ade sikit2 tp masalah skrang nak susun dlm bentuk orkestra tuh yg susah. kite pun takut kan kekadang idea tuh tertiru lagu lain pulak...u mmg suke orkestra ke mizz? byk je u tau pasal orkestra nih...
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 Author| Post time 30-1-2009 11:36 PM | Show all posts

Lagu Semarak Kedamaian Minus One Full Instrumental (Updated 01-Feb-09)

1) Versi Full Instrumental minus one (Bells, Drum, E.Guitars, Percussive, Piano, Strings, Synth Strings etc)

download dari rapidshare (2.6MB)

http://rapidshare.com/files/193169763/Semarak_Kedamaian_Final_Mixdown.mp3

or dgr trus dari imeem:

http://www.imeem.com/people/J2PMGXe/music/BR5CxYfx/hattan_ning_baizura_semarak_kedamaian_final_mixdown/

2) Versi Full Instrumental + Melody

download dari rapidshare (2.6MB)

http://rapidshare.com/files/193170359/Semarak_Kedamaian_Melody.mp3

or dgr trus dari imeem:

http://www.imeem.com/people/J2PMGXe/music/Z4_Lj54x/hattan_ning_baizura_semarak_kedamaian_melody/

Notation music video (jgn lupe nak rate tau...)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bw_AcKXN0jM

gubahan/susunan lagu: Nasr @ presa1200
software: Overture 4.0
Sample library: EWQL Colossus
Editing: Adobe Audition 3.0

[ Last edited by  Presa1200 at 5-2-2009 07:04 AM ]

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Post time 30-1-2009 11:51 PM | Show all posts

Terima kasih Presa
Terharu sangat-sangat dengan komitmen yang Presa berikan

Susunan ini dah cukup baik dah...
dapat jugak minus one Semarak Kedamaian
Ingatkan tak berpeluang masukkan lagu ni dalam konsert keamanan

Boleh lah rekod ramai-ramai nanti
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 Author| Post time 30-1-2009 11:53 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by houdini at 30-1-2009 11:51 PM

Terima kasih Presa
Terharu sangat-sangat dengan komitmen yang Presa berikan

Susunan ini dah cukup baik dah...
dapat jugak minus one Semarak Kedamaian
Ingatkan tak berpeluang m ...


oh jgn ckp gitu.. kite kan sama2 blaja dan tolong2. em... tp kalo ade masa sy nak buat versi orkestra semarak kedamaian pulak...sekurang2nye 'meriah' lah ckit...wat do u thk?
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Post time 31-1-2009 12:03 AM | Show all posts

Reply #3 Presa1200's post


Yang ada ni pun dah bersyukur sangat
tapi kalau nak tambah atau nak buat version lain terpulang pada Presa
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 Author| Post time 31-1-2009 12:06 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by houdini at 31-1-2009 12:03 AM

Yang ada ni pun dah bersyukur sangat
tapi kalau nak tambah atau nak buat version lain terpulang pada Presa


houdini bile nak rekod ramai2? tak sabar nak dgr sore korang
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Post time 31-1-2009 01:44 AM | Show all posts

Balas #3 Presa1200\ catat

setuju sgt kalo sedare leh buat dalam orkestra..

btw...kalo leh disiapkan yg orkestra kesedihan sebelum ni..mesti lagi gempak...bile drg balik yg orkestra sebelum ni..die mcm ade misterius elemen dlmnye...
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 Author| Post time 31-1-2009 02:22 AM | Show all posts
Originally posted by 033589 at 31-1-2009 01:44 AM
setuju sgt kalo sedare leh buat dalam orkestra..

btw...kalo leh disiapkan yg orkestra kesedihan sebelum ni..mesti lagigempak...bile drg balik yg orkestra sebelum ni..die mcm ade misteriusele ...


wow u btol2 sapport ye. thx so much. a'ah sy tgh nak susun lagu orkestra kesedihan tuh...still stuck kat intro lagik sbb kekadang out of idea kene tunggu ilham hahaha...orait kalo dah siap i will let u be the 1st to know bout it okay? thx again...



btw avatar tuh gmbar sapo... apsal comot je muke dia hehehe

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Post time 31-1-2009 02:50 AM | Show all posts

Balas #7 Presa1200\ catat

same2 sapot....impressed wiv talented people here...

aaha..dah siap nnt..just let us know..tayah ekslusif2 ni....

avvy tu heliza...akademi fantasia 5 stud....comot sebab kene tenyeh dgn kek on her birthday celeb..
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Post time 31-1-2009 03:00 AM | Show all posts

Reply #1 Presa1200's post

Presa mmg best! Lama dah tak nampak. Mmg otai kat board sini dulu.
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 Author| Post time 1-2-2009 01:47 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by 033589 at 31-1-2009 02:50 AM
same2 sapot....impressed wiv talented people here...

aaha..dah siap nnt..just let us know..tayah ekslusif2 ni....

avvy tu heliza...akademi fantasia 5 stud....comot sebab kene tenyeh d ...


oh ye ke u minat heliza ke? dgr org kata dia tuh kiut...hehe
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 Author| Post time 1-2-2009 01:48 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by Muntz at 31-1-2009 03:00 AM
Presa mmg best! Lama dah tak nampak. Mmg otai kat board sini dulu.


oooo mane ade otai, sy biase je... a'ah kekadang sibuk ckit... skrang ade lapang bleh lah berforum

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Post time 1-2-2009 07:06 PM | Show all posts

Reply #11 Presa1200's post

Rajin2 lah lepak sini Presa. Otai2 lama dulu ramai dah takder lepak sini lagi.
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 Author| Post time 1-2-2009 07:11 PM | Show all posts
Originally posted by Muntz at 1-2-2009 07:06 PM
Rajin2 lah lepak sini Presa. Otai2 lama dulu ramai dah takder lepak sini lagi.


oh ye ke? apsal mcm tuh? sibuk ke sume?

don't worry beb. this is only the right place
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