[HORA] Thinking Of You

shuffeak

ALBUM KE3 SHUFFEAK:pompom:
Lagu lagu baru :


MUNGKIN NANTI
LUCKY


Selamat mendengar

Amaran keras : kalau anda mengharapkan nyanyian yg tak sengau beserta vibrato,anda telah salah tempat.

[ Last edited by  jac_diehard_fan at 25-4-2009 02:40 ]

shuffeak

jemputlah masuk,kalu bwk kuih raya lagi bagus

shuffeak

lagu lucky khas utk kaka roy walaupun tanpa penyanyi wanita itu

shuffeak

nak umah kaler hijau plz

seroja23

[fly]jangan moyan lebey2 ok....[/fly]

ikhlas dari kak oja23

shuffeak

meriahnye
da dgr lom lagu shuff kaka

seroja23

dh tau...mesti nk tanya tu..tgh donlod nih..
dont wory..tiap2 hr akak dgr sore sapik...

shuffeak

da tau kaka mesti tgh donlod
thanks kaka sbb dgr sore shuff tetiap hari saat dan waktu

seroja23

sama-sama kasih...
nnt akak edit balik...akak nk bt ringtone kt henfon...
so tetiap hr mmg leh dgr sore sapik ngn oja...

shuffeak

melampaunye kalu wat ringtone
tp kalo nk wat ape salahnye

ahpek

da dgr kedua2 lagu...best..mmg sedap dengar..ada peningkatan dr segi teknik nyanyian dan vokal...mcm lagu2 yg  terkemudian mcm i'm yours,no air,ku ingin kamu semuanya best bagitulah jg dengan lagu lucky n mengintai langit ni...klau ada org kata x sedap x tau la

seroja

alyana

sedang listening .... lagu mengintai langit

alyana

omy gawd, to me byk flaws. but as amateur you sounded great, i pun amateuer jugekk nyahhhh. eja amatur pun salah   . so 7/10.


but maybe you might want to consider below. nanti i update lagi,


(Nota: tujuan i komen, i love to see u success future nanti, kita sama sama tengah belajar kan, so i wish if we can together recheck aje, but NOT NECESSARILY what yg i jot down below adalah exactly salah, or u can ask for other second opinion.)

Pendapat i,
mixing/mastering
mixing not bad, but you sounded agak distance. maybe u should make your singing lebih kedepan, come forward, maybe a bit of warm effect or with appropriate compressor setting will do.
Mic dah ok kot, sbb we have to bear dgn mic cap ayam Qannn.
but the mixing u have now, quite ok, but can be bit better. Reverb sudah ok, maybe add a bit of echo/chorus for 100 milliseconds, to give stereo effect, a bit.
maybe waktu awal tu u should let it slow a tad bit, ala-ala lullaby, but make it dramatic toward the end, especially kat korus...increase a bit volume.
don't let the song or musical instrument back there overpower u. but watch out, don make musician terlalu jauh pulak nanti.


musically agak ok, but maybe you would like to recheck belows
Pitching accuracy, maybe saat ke
00:24-26;0:33-35,0:53-0:55,1:11-1:15,1:20-1:25;1:34-1:37;1:56-1:59;2:22-2:25;2:28-2:30,2:32-2:34,2:43-2:45;3:06-3:093:10-3:12,3:16-3:20,3:36-3:45,3.48-3.51
kena recheck balik, sama tak dgn penyanyi asal, or dengar instrumental, tak pun, pakai software, cuba you apply pitching shifter, mostly flat(you teda masalah sharp normally) maybe about 0.3 to 0.5. so that you need to synch dgn muzik. sometime, bila kita nyanyi ok, but bila mixing somehow dia reducekan pitch suara kita, but ni kena tanya sound engineer, sbb banyak stuff about hz and desibel yang i sedang belajar.

timing
00:24-00:25,00:29-0:30,0:52-0:54,3:47-3:49,1:50-1:53,2:07-2:09, lelain ok kot, tak sempat nak take note. selain dgr penyanyi asal, you dengar petikan note by note. then you check balik dgn penyanyi asal. there is a reason setiap setiap note tu, samada sengaja atau tak sengaja . maknanya, timing keseluruhan ok, but awal tu kena check baik. dgn bup bup bup tet tet tet dia. you main gitar kan, so just imagine petikan tu, then you will find where should you start and which word should you hit with which note.

teknik
kareografi suara and teknik banyak yg boleh diperbaiki. so amateurish. so i take into consideration that you weak in vibrato, but you should improvise you technic that you apply, enrich it! and jadikan feeling tu sampai ke kita. lagu ni about memberi harapan dan kepercayaan and at the same time, a statement dg penuh kesungguhan. but unfortunately, the feeling tu tak sampai, or fluctuate but i would rather say tak sampai and not convincing.
Setiap hariku tulis
>> ok, damai.

Yang Ku telah jatuh cinta
>>okk, if ade mild vibrato even better

Tapi ku rasa bersalah
>>ok, if ade mild vibrato even better


Tidak ku nyatakan

alyana

Your lucky, i think good but can be better.  kira ala2, unplugg gittewww.


since no instrumenatl except guitar, so it was like cheating , but good . i hardly detect anything. so this is my weakness.

so u just doing good.

lurve your expresiveness. your color, your falsetto, your dynamic, your falsetto. your disconnect. your up and down voice projection. and, wah harmmony pun best. pitching and timing i susah nak kata yang mana2, but oklah kot.  kita suruh yg arifin.

u sounded indah in many places here, delicious,  but when you sebut 'again', 'someday','will' ,'been'agak sumbang, i mean tak indah mcm words yang lain. paling teruk 'again'.
a kidn of like sengau sangat.

mixing, byk noise, bunyi kipas pun macam i dengar.  you should learn how to reduce noise, using software or any trick possible.


anyway, sweet singing. indah tonenya. anyway, i rasa ni lullaby singing.  so jason mraz mmg suit u very well.   


i will sambung later.

[ Last edited by  alyana at 10-10-2008 01:08 AM ]

shuffeak

terharunya dgn komen yana
thanks sgt2
komen mcm ni la yg bantu i improve

shuffeak

Originally posted by seroja at 9-10-2008 06:29 PM
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nape

alyana

Originally posted by shuffeak at 10-10-2008 09:22 AM
terharunya dgn komen yana
thanks sgt2
komen mcm ni la yg bantu i improve

secara keseluruhannya, tone you dah ok, cuma ada sebutan untuk certain2 word agak kepit. but dah improve la, berbanding dulu. lagu lucky sangat nampak u improve, cuma ade certain words yang macam i sebut tula.
and bila you nyanyi lagu dari genre jason mraz, u sounded great!.  
but bila come into ballad, banyak teknik yang you apply salah, so jadi turn off sikit, macam lagu melayu tu.

your harmony just nice, i like it so much, but at times i thot that mixing for the harmony itself was better than main vocal , u buat sama settingke, atau lain setting?.  having said that, your tone for lagu lucky tu memang delicious ... . nevertheless, i tak kisah, kalau harmony tu lebih kuat atau sama kuat dengan main vocal, ikut kesesuailanlah, tapi ramai yang prefer agar harmony tu a bit slower, but nowadays i see, ramai jua yg sama kuat, but they do a trick . i mean, they use panning teknik, which means, u have to copy the same vox, in another track. so now you will have 2 tracks. track 1, you pan to right maybe 15% align, and track 2, you pan it another 15% to left, try it and experiement it. but becareful sometime, without proper mixing, those will berlawan to each other so will affect the frequency of your singing itself, akibatnya ketulenan tone you akan hilang, and end up with electrical distortion.  so pandai-pandailah you berexperiment : D. but if menjadi, you will be surprise : D

i suka sangat yang jason mraz tu . delicious.  berapa lama you ambil to train ?  if you perfect kan lagi, sure ramai orang akan kagum whether normal listener hatta pelajar music sekalipun.  
i rasakan, kalau u perform lagu tu masa Annual Dinner, macam tu, sure tepukan gemuruh . mana lagu jason mrz yang lagu satu, i nak dengar lah

shuffeak

Originally posted by alyana at 10-10-2008 10:25 AM


secara keseluruhannya, tone you dah ok, cuma ada sebutan untuk certain2 word agak kepit. but dah improve la, berbanding dulu. lagu lucky sangat nampak u improve, cuma ade certain words yang m ...

i pun rasa suara i sesuai ngan genre2 mcm tu.lagu2 slow ni perlukan vibrato yg i tak reti nk buat
and pasal setting tu,i gune sonfoj,so takde such thing as percentage seme tuh
lucky tu sepatutnye duet ngan sorg penyanyi wanita tersohor tp dia bz
so i cuba la duet ngan diri sndrik,menjadi plak harmony
lagu im yours ade kat umah lame

shuffeak

Originally posted by ahpek at 9-10-2008 04:19 PM
da dgr kedua2 lagu...best..mmg sedap dengar..ada peningkatan dr segi teknik nyanyian dan vokal...mcm lagu2 yg  terkemudian mcm i'm yours,no air,ku ingin kamu semuanya best bagitulah jg dengan lag ...

terharu jugak ngan komen ahpek