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 Author| Post time 9-5-2014 09:26 PM | Show all posts
Nicki_Meow posted on 9-5-2014 03:04 PM
Thanks for the story....

Part merogol then terlepas je iols tak berkenan....

tq krn baca...memang sengaja masukkan part tu..di dunia nyata ni ramai yg terlepas..bukan satu kes...banyk, yg lebih sadis, kes suka sama suka..pastu buang baby.. tpi yalah..pilihan dan  selera memasing kan....





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 Author| Post time 9-5-2014 09:33 PM | Show all posts
ladyFinger12 posted on 9-5-2014 03:09 PM
Kann??

Thanks Ipo. Like ur writings too. Harap2 dpt menjadi penulis yg berilmiah dan mendidik m ...

tq ladyfinger...karya ipo ni tak boleh masuk carta..tak setanding ngan penulis hebat di sini, terutama yg dah ada versi cetak dan ada yg didramakan..salute kat korang.Tahniah!

Tapi memang betul, karya yg ada ilmu dn pengajaran itu yg lebih baik.
Actually, ipo tulis this story just nak cabar diri sendiri, so redah saja...asyik baca novel org je....



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 Author| Post time 9-5-2014 09:34 PM | Show all posts
amyza82 posted on 9-5-2014 04:01 PM
tq ipoh.i suka you punya cerita.lagipun you selalu update.sukeeee.

thanks for reading this picisan story..
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 Author| Post time 9-5-2014 09:41 PM | Show all posts
maaf jika ada kesalahan tatabahasa, kosa kata, bahasa tak cantik, tak puitis, atau ayat yg tak betul (english/bm). Teguran dari penulis/pembaca di sini amat dihargai..any bad/good comments dialu-alukan. Tak kisahlah dari segi jalan cerita ke, plot ke, atau  scene yg tak senonoh..boleh je komen. bad or good kena terima dgn hati terbuka, tak gitu?

So, adios..

tq all readers..till then, see ouls..assalamualaikum.
Last edited by Ipo on 9-5-2014 10:58 PM

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Post time 9-5-2014 09:55 PM | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 9-5-2014 09:21 PM
hahaha...jdi robot la si elijebeh tu

iols mencik ok dgn elijebeh tu, nasib dah mam!@#
kalo dah pergi ke alam satu tu,
jgn lak elijebet ni gatal nk jd hantu mcm cik leha ganggu hdp arissa daniel lps ni
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Post time 9-5-2014 09:58 PM | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 9-5-2014 09:41 PM
maaf jika ada kesalahan tatabahasa, kosa kata, bahasa tak cantik, tak puitis, atau ayat yg tak betul ...

tq ipo sbb sudi gak habiskan cerita arissa daniel utk kami semua baca...
nak ciuman utk ipo bakal penulis berjaya


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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 08:00 AM | Show all posts
tq Nay  @NaylaArisha

dpt points lagi..
Last edited by Ipo on 10-5-2014 08:03 AM

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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 08:00 AM | Show all posts
lina21 posted on 9-5-2014 09:55 PM
iols mencik ok dgn elijebeh tu, nasib dah mam!@#
kalo dah pergi ke alam satu tu,
jgn la ...

hahah...boleh gak buat citer hantu elijebeh tu muncul lg
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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 08:02 AM | Show all posts
lina21 posted on 9-5-2014 09:58 PM
tq ipo sbb sudi gak habiskan cerita arissa daniel utk kami semua baca...
nak ciuman utk ipo bakal ...

tq3..kalau ada citer di otak ni, sudi2lkanlah  baca yer..
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Post time 10-5-2014 10:56 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 10-5-2014 08:00 AM
tq Nay  @NaylaArisha

dpt points lagi..

most welcome... best citer ni... klu di panjangkn jadi novel mmg menarik...
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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 10:59 AM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 10-5-2014 10:56 AM
most welcome... best citer ni... klu di panjangkn jadi novel mmg menarik...

dah tak larat la Nay...jenuh otak ni nak pikir plot..tpi rasanya dah boleh jadi satu buku tu..
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Post time 10-5-2014 11:46 AM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 10-5-2014 10:59 AM
dah tak larat la Nay...jenuh otak ni nak pikir plot..tpi rasanya dah boleh jadi satu buku tu..

try lah submit tuk di bukukan
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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 11:59 AM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 10-5-2014 11:46 AM
try lah submit tuk di bukukan

haih...ada ke publisher nak?...citer ntah apa2 ni..tgklah...kalau ipo merajinkan diri..
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Post time 10-5-2014 12:07 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 10-5-2014 11:59 AM
haih...ada ke publisher nak?...citer ntah apa2 ni..tgklah...kalau ipo merajinkan diri..

ada jer.... bnyak publisher yg berminat
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 Author| Post time 10-5-2014 12:30 PM | Show all posts
NaylaArisha posted on 10-5-2014 12:07 PM
ada jer.... bnyak publisher yg berminat

nanti ipo godek2 web dia orang..heheh..
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Post time 10-5-2014 01:43 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Congratulatio Ipo... :lol
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Post time 10-5-2014 03:27 PM From the mobile phone | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 10-5-2014 12:30 PM
nanti ipo godek2 web dia orang..heheh..

try jer.. bg prolog dulu jgn bg semua... huhu
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Post time 10-5-2014 05:38 PM | Show all posts
satu-satunya citer, watak heroin buat hatiku mendidih bangat
kalo aiii jadik daniel dah lame ku tinggalkan arissa ...huarghhh geramm giler

tahniah ..such an awesome story
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Post time 10-5-2014 11:09 PM | Show all posts
Ipo posted on 10-5-2014 08:00 AM
hahah...boleh gak buat citer hantu elijebeh tu muncul lg

ipo ni kalo bab2 cerita seram laju je ek...
iols sokong jeh apa2 uols tulis,
suka baca jeh, nak menulis pnjang2 mcm ipo lak tak pandai
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Post time 11-5-2014 04:17 PM | Show all posts


tahniah Ipo.... best sgt cerita ni, cukup perencah

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