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Post time 6-5-2006 01:59 AM | Show all posts |Read mode
apa kata kite post haikus here....

the wind is blowing
tonight it is very dark
the moon is so bright....

haiku nie kalo tak tau is traditional japanese poetry yg guna urutan syllables 5, 7, 5 (atau morae dlm bhs jepun)...mmg pendek dan senang (maybe mencabar kot skit skit sbb nak carik perkataan dgn syllables yg sesuai)..waakakaka...so korang postla apa2 haiku yg korang bleh cipta...BM pun bleh asalkan syllables dia (ikut phonology/phonetics) 5,7,5....k...kite meriahkan haiku2 rekaan sendiri kat sini...

aku bg contoh haiku BM ciptaan aku....

ku lihat kamu
kau berdiri di situ
jangan kau pergi...

ps-susah jugakla nk wat haiku nie...pendek sgt...wakaaakka....

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 Author| Post time 6-5-2006 02:03 AM | Show all posts
oh ya kalo nak tau syarat2 dia leh baca di sini...http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/...
biasenya it has to have a seasonal theme tapi takyahla kt sini...susah sgtla nak mampatkan words into a 5,7,5 metrical line....
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Post time 6-5-2006 02:24 AM | Show all posts
tidak ku duga
saat ku memerlukan
kau hadir lagi
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Post time 6-5-2006 02:28 AM | Show all posts
ku kedinginan
kau tiada di sisi
terpisah jauh...

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 Author| Post time 6-5-2006 02:49 AM | Show all posts

Reply #4 aGuiLeHa's post

psl aku ke tu??? wakakakakakakakkkaa....prasannya aku....

hebat gila ko punya haiku leha...wow!!
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Post time 6-5-2006 02:55 AM | Show all posts

Reply #5 IrvingLorenzo's post

tau xpe, musti aa psl ko.. wakakaka =p

yeke hebat? hahah, macehh2.. aku saje try test.. best aa plak..
nnt2 bleh wat lg..

=)
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Post time 6-5-2006 03:09 AM | Show all posts
irving lorenzo..
seorg ninja ensem..
baik hatinya..

wakakakaka, ntah apo2.. =p
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Post time 6-5-2006 03:18 AM | Show all posts
aku tak sabar..
christina aguilera..
mana albumnya?

hahahaha.. =p
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 Author| Post time 6-5-2006 03:35 AM | Show all posts
siapa dia?
aguileha sangat best
leha memang best...
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Post time 6-5-2006 03:41 AM | Show all posts

Reply #9 IrvingLorenzo's post

ahahhahaha, macehhh dear!!! mmuahh.. =)
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Post time 6-5-2006 03:49 AM | Show all posts
terluka lagi
sakit tidak terhingga
hatiku pedih
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Post time 6-5-2006 03:52 AM | Show all posts
ku kelemasan
dalam keegoanmu
mengapa sayang?
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Post time 6-5-2006 04:05 AM | Show all posts
hanya padamu
aku mengadu kasih
Tuhan yang satu..
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 Author| Post time 6-5-2006 05:43 AM | Show all posts
kau sungguh jiwang
janganlah kau begitu
usah berjiwang....
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:12 AM | Show all posts
sebok aa engkau..
dtg mengganggu aku..
boleh jalan daaa..

wakakakaka.. =p

[ Last edited by  aGuiLeHa at 6-5-2006 07:17 AM ]
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:19 AM | Show all posts
Tuhan yg esa..
tunjukkan ku jalanMu..
menuju syurga..
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:21 AM | Show all posts
kicauan burung..
memecah kesunyian..
aku tersentak..

dikau menjelma..
sekelumit ingatan..
tak mungkin pudar..
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:23 AM | Show all posts
hatiku hampa..
dirundung kegusaran..
dikau di mana??

merintih sepi..
mungkinkah selamanya..
aku sendiri??
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:25 AM | Show all posts
ummi ku sayang..
pesanmu tetap utuh..
terus ku junjung..

sihat kah dikau?
bagaimana hari mu?
aku merindu..
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Post time 6-5-2006 07:31 AM | Show all posts
duhai ayah ku..
kasihmu tetap ada..
kekal terpahat..
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