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truly Publish time 28-10-2011 10:58 PM

All the wonders of you....

Post Last Edit by truly at 11-7-2012 17:51

It is not that...


Sometimes I wonder
If you ever think of me
Since we no longer bother
On what used to be

It is not that it wasnt meant to be
Or the teardrops that sometimes linger over me
It is not that I'm no longer a priority
Or your life is now complete even without me

It is not those reasons that bother me
It is the fact that you left me
Without a goodbye or token of good memory
Was I so insignificant in your history? Last edited by truly on 3-2-2013 04:08 PM

mierrr Publish time 28-10-2011 11:07 PM

wahh Tru...i pun masuk ni...ni u create sendiri ya....pandai...{:1_132:}

truly Publish time 28-10-2011 11:10 PM

wahh Tru...i pun masuk ni...ni u create sendiri ya....pandai...
mierrr Post at 28-10-2011 23:07 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

thanks hehe mesti la buat sendiri, baru buat jap tadi. untuk exI hehe.


Tu you belum tengok I buat puisi bahasa melayu. I minat menulis cuma masa tak mengizinkan. :)

mierrr Publish time 28-10-2011 11:13 PM

thanks hehe mesti la buat sendiri, baru buat jap tadi. untuk exI hehe.


Tu you belum tengo ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:10 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif



wah..bagusnya...{:1_132:}



oh..patutla ada ayat yang sedih ..kalau sastera ayat sedih kita panggil apa ya...melankolik..err betul ke i ni..:sweat3:

nanti buatla dalam bahasa melayu pula..tp B.I pun ok...

transkripsi Publish time 28-10-2011 11:25 PM

alamak sedih lh pulak ni T .
jgn sedih2 yer .

poem ni mmg ikhlas dr hati yg luhur ..
good job T .. {:1_149:}

truly Publish time 28-10-2011 11:32 PM

Thanks semua. Nanti I tulis lagi. Dah, tak boleh sembang sini, nanti mod sini marah. Ni bod puisi kan? Baru I nak masuk nanti kena marah pulak hehe :)

lkick2113 Publish time 28-10-2011 11:45 PM

very talented and such a poetic rhymes :)

truly Publish time 28-10-2011 11:48 PM

very talented and such a poetic rhymes
lkick2113 Post at 28-10-2011 23:45 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

hehe thanks. You dah puji ni I kembang semangkuk, malu taw. :loveliness:


jom kita balik CI, nanti bila bila I tulis lagi hehe.

lkick2113 Publish time 28-10-2011 11:54 PM

hehe thanks. You dah puji ni I kembang semangkuk, malu taw.


jom kita balik CI, ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:48 http://mforum.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif


    that's compliment memang ikhlas tru.... tru u minat tulis lirik lagu tak???

truly Publish time 28-10-2011 11:58 PM

Post Last Edit by truly at 29-10-2011 00:00

that's compliment memang ikhlas tru.... tru u minat tulis lirik lagu tak???
lkick2113 Post at 28-10-2011 23:54 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

tulis lagu? hish tak pernah try. Nak tulis buat apa hehe. Kalau I ada masa, memang ada jugak I berpuisi, koleksi peribadi. In fact masa I bercuti, ader jer puisi I tulis. lepas tu simpan. Poem ni I buat tak sampai 5 minit pun, cewah berlagak la pulak hehe tu la jangan puji. ;P

lkick2113 Publish time 29-10-2011 12:01 AM

tulis lagu? hish tak pernah try. Nak tulis buat apa hehe. Kalau I ada masa, memang ada jugak I b ...
truly Post at 28-10-2011 23:58 http://mforum.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif


    ooo.....kalau u tulis lirik lagi bagus rasanya..... I ada la tulis suka2, tapi lagu rap (hip hop) la.....

truly Publish time 22-12-2011 11:03 PM

Truly..

To the sweet time that we hardly remembered..
River that flows carrying dreams defeated
Under the moon the stars and morning mist
Lights turned to darkness


Yearning for love you once were, I submit to the sorrow.

{:1_149:}

truly Publish time 4-1-2012 10:45 PM

Post Last Edit by truly at 4-1-2012 22:55

Unmarked Grave
When it was your turnI did not see your footstep
   In the house that was once fabricated in stone
   Dreams shattered, we decided to furnish it now with regrets.

What choice do I have?
That I had the lock and key
finally rested at sea
in an unmarked grave, stories of you and me.

But for ending this tragic
I will forgive you should you refused to see the logic.

{:1_149:}

lkick2113 Publish time 4-1-2012 11:22 PM

tru...kenal tak Emily Dickinson??

truly Publish time 4-1-2012 11:25 PM

tru...kenal tak Emily Dickinson??
lkick2113 Post at 4-1-2012 23:22 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

American poet tu kan, kenapa?

lkick2113 Publish time 4-1-2012 11:44 PM

American poet tu kan, kenapa?
truly Post at 4-1-2012 23:25 http://mforum.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif


    yup.....poem yg mana yg u minat hasil karya dia???

truly Publish time 4-1-2012 11:47 PM

yup.....poem yg mana yg u minat hasil karya dia???
lkick2113 Post at 4-1-2012 23:44 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

Tak ada any particular one. banyak la baca, dulu dalam english kelas pun kena ambil poem dia ni.

lkick2113 Publish time 5-1-2012 12:00 AM

Tak ada any particular one. banyak la baca, dulu dalam english kelas pun kena ambil poem dia ni.
truly Post at 4-1-2012 23:47 http://mforum.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif


    poem yg mana satu???

cmf_raudah Publish time 5-1-2012 09:44 AM

rupanya budak2 CI ni pandai berpoem:lol::lol::lol:

truly Publish time 5-1-2012 11:15 PM

rupanya budak2 CI ni pandai berpoem
cmf_raudah Post at 5-1-2012 09:44 http://eforum3.cari.com.my/images/common/back.gif

Bila jemu bertengkar, tulis poem pula eheh. :loveliness:


thanks sebab sudi baca by the way.

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