baggie
Publish time 20-10-2010 08:49 AM
huhuhu lama tak baca citer camni....sedih :'(
sitifarishah
Publish time 20-10-2010 12:23 PM
good story.simple but nice. tp banyak 2 ayat yg bersambung. kene perbaiki taipan..
sitifarishah
Publish time 20-10-2010 12:23 PM
good story.simple but nice. tp banyak 2 ayat yg bersambung. kene perbaiki taipan..
sang_arjuna
Publish time 20-10-2010 02:48 PM
best... cantik bahasanya
liyanur
Publish time 20-10-2010 03:05 PM
dh bc...mula2 cam malas sbb x fhm bahasa sastera....
tp overall ok la...nice try....
qimi08
Publish time 20-10-2010 03:06 PM
Ini dapat idea dari lagu juara AF 8 Shahirlah ni...
Baca cerita ni ternpk VC si shahir tu...
Bagus rajin2 tulis cerpen pendek... teruskan
RosesAre_Red
Publish time 20-10-2010 04:23 PM
Reply 17# ShahGraphixer
sama2.... :$ teruskan berkaya k, kte enjoy baca {:1_152:}