i can lie down and forget
life is too fragile...=( my mind is empty
thoughts sail away and fly off
my heart is lonely... depression sets in
the heart is sad and hollow
tears cannot be dropped... the end is so near
a little more and i'm off
i'm about to leave goodbye to you all
i am glad to have met you
i will be free soon...
[ Last edited byIrvingLorenzo at 12-5-2006 12:53 AM ] hope is still alive
happiness comes after pain
the sun shines brightly...=) i am so thankful
God has brought you to me, and
a smile lights me up!=)
Reply #127 karlreef's post
apa yg unfairnya??? kesian ko.....Reply #129 karlreef's post
oh bentuk haiku ye??jap jap... ok ok....
karlreef oh karlreef
what is so unfair to you?
explain it to me....
amacam...ok jwb jwb... ke mana saja
ku tidak lagi sepi
wajahmu hadir..
kasih, maafkan
ku meminjam wajahmu
buat peneman..
wajahmu kasih
ku jadikan penyuluh
penerang hati..
ke dasar cinta
ku semakin tenggelam
ku kerinduan...........................
___________aku conclude dr my all-time-fave song: kasih ku pinjm wajahmu by teachers pet.. =) masih tak tidor
apakah? mengapakah?
aku tak tahu................................. kibarkanlah!!
panji murni hatimu
kibarkanlah!! realitinya
kulit kah membezakan???
dikau dan aku... malasnya aku
tiada berpenghujung
termangu lagi...............
aku mencari
sempadan kehidupan
ku keresahan....
harapn itu
masih ku genggam lagi
menjadi debu............. ku masih baru
niat nak turut serta
harap tak ganggu
:malu: thank you coz accept
diriku yang baru ni
will try do my best!
Reply #141 eis_82's post
sila kan silakan eispost lagi...
sesapapun dialu alukan tulis haiku kat sini.....wakakkakakka....
jgn malu2....tulis je... Originally posted by karlreef at 17-5-2006 02:20 AM
ala irving...dlm bentuk haiku la....
aper la karlreef
tegur him ko pun sama
mana haiku ko?
:pmuka:
Reply #144 eis_82's post
kekekekkeek....kena balik karl.....wakakakak....karl ko pun kalo nk sound aku kena dlm bentuk haiku la....waakkakakka.....lgpun aku cuba nk buat haiku tapi tak dpt carik perkataan sesuai nak fit utk 5,7,5 tu..so main tulis jela....ps-karl, leha tak masuk ka arinie??