camm Publish time 18-1-2006 09:30 AM

Let's build up a story

This is another way to improve your English, hope everybody will join in.
*Kalau ada kesalahan, bolehlah kawan2 kita yang pandai tu tolong betulkan.

I will begin the story, you can continue it and we'll see how the end turns up :)


The night was young. I picked up my book and continued to read when I heard...

seribulan Publish time 18-1-2006 10:46 PM

a gunshot sound out of nowhere. Quite close.

camm Publish time 18-1-2006 11:53 PM

I was startled by the sound of the gun and accidentally dropped the book to the floor.

seribulan Publish time 19-1-2006 12:03 AM

Crash. The window near to my side splintered like showering drizzle.
I ducked.

camm Publish time 19-1-2006 12:32 AM

I crawled under the table and felt my hands trembling as I tried to turn off the light.

pelicano Publish time 19-1-2006 11:13 AM

But it was too late! Somebody caught my ankle and roughly pulled me right out from under the table.

seribulan Publish time 19-1-2006 05:03 PM

'Where's your husband, dearie?' a raspy, bitter voice threw out the question...

camm Publish time 19-1-2006 06:12 PM

I struggled as hard as I could, trying to free my ankle from his grip.

seribulan Publish time 19-1-2006 08:31 PM

'Stop your struggles or you gonna be sorry!!'

'You got the wrong place...I don't have a husband!"

camm Publish time 19-1-2006 11:38 PM

Hearing my words, he laughed out loud and grabbed my other leg, pulling me towards him. I saw the book ...




(hey, how come we're the only one playing...lol)

pelicano Publish time 20-1-2006 08:50 AM

The book! ..yes!...maybe that was what he was after.

seribulan Publish time 20-1-2006 06:15 PM

or I could use the book to knock the living daylight out of him.
Bingo!

btho Publish time 23-1-2006 07:51 PM

And suddenly, a frighted little voice came from nowhere...."kak long?Kak long where are you?"
That was my dear little sister.Oh no!!!!

onceli Publish time 23-1-2006 08:58 PM

my brilliant idea of hitting the man with the book vanished before my eyes.. my sister! oh no! i just can't.. can't let her get close.. and just as i feared, i heard her little footsteps getting nearer and nearer...

limau_nipis Publish time 23-1-2006 09:01 PM

He cupped my mouth so hard and I bite. But he didn't budge. I was screaming but not even my little sister could hear my voice.

And at that moment, I know my sister would never find me.

seribulan Publish time 23-1-2006 09:15 PM

Blackness swirled. Next time, I opened my eyes, my heart stopped!

onceli Publish time 23-1-2006 09:25 PM

"where am i? this is not my house!"

i looked around me frantically. i was in a room where there were no furniture except for old cardboards strewn everywhere.

i was all alone.

seribulan Publish time 23-1-2006 09:31 PM

"You should count your lucky star to still be able to have a chance
to know this is not your abode...ahahahah!" the raspy, bitter laugh
menacingly tickled my ears.

onceli Publish time 23-1-2006 09:40 PM

i screamed. the man was back! i could not see his hideous face for it was covered in a mask.

"scream as loud as you can... no one can hear you here!!!" he laughed like a maniac.

seribulan Publish time 23-1-2006 11:10 PM

"Where's your husband? We need him to do a special job for us..."
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